We used this picture to prompt our writing. We imagined what was happening in this picture.
We had different WALTS based on our needs in writing.
Walt: use super sentences
Success criteria:
We will use short, medium and long sentences.
We will use joining words such as "and" and "because"
This a great example of super sentences
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* I like the way you used the joining word 'because' to tell me why the Lizard was sad.
Wish: You could try using a short sentence to help create impact.
Mrs M
Oh wow, I love the choice picture and writing, I cant wait to read some more... GO Room 4
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